Ok so..I re-recorded that last piece I submitted for critiquing, added some midi synth to it, and mixed it all over again. Any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. The guitar parts are recorded by me on acoustic guitar and a condenser mic. The bowed bass and piano are VSTi's, played by me on a midi keyboard controller.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/75572738c4eb5686/